Apr 14, 2009

Essay 1-01a; Writing placement essay for writing3

Hello, my name is Yukie and I’m 19 years old. I’m from Kumamoto, and I live there. There is a big castle whose name is Kumamoto castle. I want you to see that so I’ll bring pictures. I’m a student of KGU and my major is English. I like to learn about foreign culture and foreign language. When I was 13 years old, I began to study English. English is the most useful language in the world so I would like to speak English more fluently.

By the way, I’ve never been to your country, Canada. I know that the temperature of Canada is lower than that of Japan. I worry about my clothes. I don’t have many clothes for winter so I have to buy. I’d like to go to Prince Edward Island. Anne of Green Gables is my favorite book so I interested in Anne’s house and the nature of island. How long does it take from Halifax to the island?

My favorite food is salad and tomato is really good for me. But I don’t like tomato juice. I like dressing better than mayonnaise. I know that maple syrup is really famous in Canada. My Canadian friend, Gina, recommended that I have it so I want to try it. Oh, I have to tell you about milk tea. I don’t like milk tea. When I have milk tea, I have a stomachache. I don’t know why it happens.

I’m really looking forward to visiting you. I want to improve my English skill and speak with a lot of people. In Canada, I’ll be able to have a wonderful time with you!
Sincerely yours, Yukie

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7 comments:

Joe Tomei said...

Hi Yukie,
Nice essay, but be careful about your title. You have a combination of 2-byte (zenkaku) and 1-byte (hankaku) characters. Also, be careful about spelling!

Yusuke said...

Hello Yukie,
I also like to learn about foreign culture and foreign language but I really don't like tomato. I hope you can have a good time in Canada.

Takako said...

Hi Uno-chan!! This is Takako. How are you doing? I didn't kow that you were in this class!! Are you ready to go to Canada yet? I recommed you to bring "pancake mix" to Canada:p See you later:)

Pika said...

Hi Yukari,
It sounds good to go Canada! I heard that you go there for a year. It's so long term. I'm sure that you exprience a lot, and be a good English speaker. You may be sad sometime, but I chear you up!
Have a good time in Canada☆

sayaka said...

Hi! Yukie! Your blog is very lovely. I don't like milk tea, either. Because its taste is very bad. It is too sweet. I don't know about Anne of Great Gables, so please tell me about it more.

Kana said...

Hi! Grandmother☆
I love you♡
I don't like study English:(
But do my best!!!

Uno said...

To Yusuke,
Thank you:) I will have a wonderful time, I believe.

To Takako,
Hi Takako~:p
I don't know,either!! Oh, pancake mix is good? I'll bring it!!

To Pika
Thank you!!
I want to have a good time in Canada, but actually, I'm really nervous. I'll do my best.

To Sayaka,
Anne of Green Gables is so good story. Anee is really attractive girl. I'm reading English version.

To kana,
I love you, too:p
You can do your best!!
If you confuse, I'll help you:)